by park shee june
Book,
wonderful book,
when I able to look
yoursmell are cook
In your forest
deep deep forest
I can imagine anythinganything what i'm thinking
There is lots of stories
which can make me laugh
sometimes your so cold-s
so you made me cough
But, book
wonderful book
I really like you
as much as stories in you
Sheejune,
답글삭제For the most part, your ode was alright. Your second stanza was pretty good, but I was confused with some of the stanzas. For instance, in your first stanza, you talked about “when I able to look/your smell are cook”? I wish that your focus were a clearer and that your choice of vocabulary was clearer as well.